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You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter • Say where/when you went on holiday • Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday • Tell them what you would like them to do

You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter • Say where/when you went on holiday • Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday • Tell them what you would like them to do xDEJ6
Recently, I spend my bank holiday at the hotel where is located in a beautiful island known as KISH Island for a week from 8 Dec to 17 Dec with my family, in spite of our pleasure for a while we were staying there, on the contrast, there is a dissatisfaction that I am writing to express by this letter. Actually, when I was looking for an affordable suite, hence, I found it in your website, consequently I booked it for a specific period that we have decided for staying, followed by booking, I complete the form in order to pay charge room by my credit card, on the contrary, when we arrived, unfortunately, I realized the cost is withdrawn and it is more than the price I was booked before, therefore I ought to pay and I could not anything to do, regarding my booking that is registered in your database by its number #4545, I would like to repay that extra money payment, due to, our setting was booked by the price that was written in your booking platform. I am looking forward to hearing any suggestion from your well known agency considering my petition. Yours faithfully, A. Rezai
Recently, I spend my bank holiday at the hotel where
is located
in a
beautiful
island known as
KISH
Island for a week from 8 Dec to 17 Dec with my family,
in spite of
our pleasure for a while we were staying there, on the contrast, there is a dissatisfaction that I am writing to express by this letter.

Actually, when I was looking for an affordable suite,
hence
, I found it in your website,
consequently
I booked it for a specific period that we have decided for staying, followed by booking, I complete the form in order to pay charge room by my credit card,
on the contrary
, when we arrived, unfortunately, I realized the cost is withdrawn and it is more than the price I
was booked
before
,
therefore
I ought to pay and I
could not anything
to do, regarding my booking that
is registered
in your database by its number #4545, I would like to repay that extra money payment, due to, our setting
was booked
by the price that
was written
in your booking platform.

I am looking forward to hearing any suggestion from your well known agency considering my petition.

Yours
faithfully
,

A. Rezai
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IELTS letter You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter • Say where/when you went on holiday • Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday • Tell them what you would like them to do

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  American English
5 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
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