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my complaint letter about restaurants

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Namangan MingbulakJuly 29. 07. 2021CarlSherdor JamashuySubject, the price and taste of the foodDear Sir. Yesterday, my parents and I visited your Restaurant on Sherdor and was really disappointed with the peculiarity of food that was subserve to I was deeply dissatisfied with your Restaurant everything is all right, but the food and drinks are not good. I was appalled at the unsatisfactory accomodation your foods very salty and slightly blaze. I did not like your foods by the way. I hope that I will not be jorced to take further action. Also, Your mistake will not turn back. You must taste prepare national dishes. Your faithfully, Omonjonova Xurshida
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Namangan
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MingbulakJuly
29. 07. 2021CarlSherdor
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JamashuySubject
, the price and taste of the
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foodDear
Sir. Yesterday, my parents and I visited your Restaurant on
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Sherdor
and was
really
disappointed with the peculiarity of
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food
that was
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subserve
to I was
deeply
dissatisfied with your Restaurant everything is all right,
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but
the
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food
and drinks are not
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good
. I
was appalled
at the unsatisfactory
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accomodation
your
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foods
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
salty and
slightly
blaze. I did not like your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
by the way.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope that I will not be
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jorced
to take
further
action.
Also
, Your mistake will not turn back. You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
taste prepare national dishes.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,
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Omonjonova
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Xurshida
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IELTS letter my complaint letter about restaurants

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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