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Actually you forget your small purse at your friend house light him letter to send you're purse

Actually you forget your small purse at your friend house light him letter to send you're purse bDNDQ

Dear Johan, Hoping you are doing well. Firstly, I want to inform you that I reached at my home on time. When I was taking out my things from suitcase, I found, my little purse missing. In the purse form a my all identity cards such as voter card, driving licence and credit cards were there. Please keep them with yourself until you send me. Next month, voting would be started in my country and without voter card no one is allowed to vote. Here, I would like to send me water card through post, so that I will able to give my vote as a responsible citizen. Furthermore, the cost of Courier services, I would like to pay. Send me your bank details so that I can transfer the posting charges on time. Actually, it is my fault I did not pack my things properly before leaving your home. Hoping you will send me all these items as soon as possible. Yours faithfully,

Dear Johan,

Hoping you are doing well. Firstly
, I want to inform you that I reached at my home on time. When I was taking out my things from suitcase, I found, my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 purse missing. In the purse form A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my all" or "a all"?my alla all
a my all
 identity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
cards
 such as voter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
, driving Possible spelling mistake. 'licence' is British English.license
licence
 and credit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
cards
 were there. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them with yourself until you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshootexpressrelaygrantpostdrop
send
 me.

Next
 month, voting would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 in my country and without voter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 no one is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to vote. Here, I would like to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshootexpressrelaygrantpostdrop
send
 me water You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 through post, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I Did you mean "will be able"?will be able
will able
 to give my vote as a responsible citizen.

Furthermore
, the cost of Courier services, I would like to pay. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshootexpressrelaygrantpostdrop
Send
 me your bank This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can transfer the posting charges on time. Actually, it is my fault I did not pack my things properly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 leaving your home.

Hoping you will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshootexpressrelaygrantpostdrop
send
 me all these items as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours faithfully
, 