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Your English school has students who come from around the world to study. Your class is going to make a video about interesting places to visit in your town, for the school website. Your teacher has asked each student to write a report suggesting two places that should be filmed and why.

Your English school has students who come from around the world to study. Your class is going to make a video about interesting places to visit in your town, for the school website. Your teacher has asked each student to write a report suggesting two places that should be filmed and why. rYn2l
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to making suggestions concering the places I would like to recommend for the school website. I can imagine that there are varieties of diversity from all over the world. Therefore, choosing two distinctive places would be better. One suggestion would be London. Needless to say, London is one of the best well-known city in the world. People who have different backgrounds gather surrounding the city and there are a number of modern sites to see and move around. This can meet with students' satisfaction. Another suggestion would be the city called Rye near Brighton. Compared to London, Rye is quite nostalgic and historic. It is a much smaller town than London, resulting in enjoying the visit more comfortably. Differenting the atmosphere, it gives other enjoyment to the students. In summary, I highly recommend those younger to visit two areas due to the reasons I mentioned above. I hope that the youngsters can spend their time pleasantly by the trip.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to making suggestions
concering
the places I would like to recommend for the school website. I can imagine that there are varieties of diversity from all over the world.
Therefore
, choosing two distinctive places would be better.

One suggestion would be London. Needless to say, London is one of the best well-known city in the world.
People
who have
different
backgrounds gather surrounding the city and there are a number of modern sites to
see
and
move
around. This can
meet
with students' satisfaction.

Another suggestion would be the city called Rye near Brighton. Compared to London, Rye is quite nostalgic and historic. It is a much smaller town than London, resulting in enjoying the visit more
comfortably
.
Differenting
the atmosphere, it gives other enjoyment to the students.

In summary, I
highly
recommend those younger to visit two areas due to the reasons I mentioned above. I hope that the youngsters can spend their time
pleasantly
by the trip.
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IELTS letter Your English school has students who come from around the world to study. Your class is going to make a video about interesting places to visit in your town, for the school website. Your teacher has asked each student to write a report suggesting two places that should be filmed and why.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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