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You went to the hospital with stomach acha and there yoz were treated well.You were very pleased with the good service

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Dear Sir, I am writng this letter to express my thanks and appreciation to Mr. Joe who is doctor of your hospita. Last week I had a stomach ache so I treated at your hospital. During that period the doctors took very good care of me. There are all the cinvinience in the hispital such as: labaratory, fitobar and also service was greate. The rooms were cozy, bright and clean. The nurses were polite. Especially doctor jack was terifically good. I was happy in your hospital's doctor because he treated my stomache ache very well. There is no pain now and l feel good. I and my family were very much grateful to you hospital. Please forward my heartfult thankfulness to yours. We feel for having auch a good service. Yours faithfully, Emily.
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hospita
. Last week I had a stomach ache
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I treated at your hospital. During that period the
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care of me. There are all the
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hispital
such as:
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greate
. The rooms were cozy, bright and clean. The nurses were polite.
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doctor
jack was
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terifically
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good
. I was happy in your hospital's
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doctor
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he treated my
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stomache
ache
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well. There is no pain
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and l feel
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good
. I and my family were
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much grateful to you hospital.
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forward my
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. We feel for having
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faithfully
, Emily.

IELTS letter You went to the hospital with stomach acha and there yoz were treated well. You were very pleased with the good service

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  American English
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133 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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