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Apology Letter To A Friend For Not Attending His/Her Birthday Party

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Dear Kuldeep I hope this letter finds you on the top of your health and wealth as well as you had a fabulous birthday bash! yesterday night. I am sorry that I was enable to come on your special occasion I was desperate and waiting for this moment from too long but unfortunately could not able to attend Moreover, I am feeling terrible that over and above this, was unable to inform you about my missing attedence. On your birthday morning my boss ask me to host the seminar on behalf of my colleagues as he met with an accident on the same, consequencely due to which I stuck badly and could not deny to my senior as the reputation of my organisation was dependent on the in on this presentation. Due to this issue, was not entitled to come on the eve. Personally expect that you will forgive me and will join me tonight party which I specially organised for you. Will catch you in the evening. Neha
Dear
Kuldeep


I hope this letter finds you on the top of your health and wealth
as well
as you had a fabulous birthday bash!
yesterday night
.

I am sorry that I was
enable
to
come
on your special occasion I was desperate and waiting for this moment from too long
but
unfortunately could not able to attend
Moreover
, I am feeling terrible that over and above this, was unable to inform you about my missing
attedence
.

On your birthday morning my boss ask me to host the seminar on behalf of my colleagues as he met with an accident on the same,
consequencely
due to which I stuck
badly
and could not deny to my senior as the reputation of my
organisation
was dependent on the in on this presentation. Due to this issue, was not entitled to
come
on the eve.

Personally
expect
that you will forgive me and will
join
me tonight party which I
specially
organised
for you.

Will catch you in the evening.

Neha
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IELTS letter Apology Letter To A Friend For Not Attending His/Her Birthday Party

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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