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You have been offered a job overseas that you applied for . Write a letter to your friend who already knows about that job as well.

You have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who already knows about that job as well. jmQd

Dear raphel, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. I am writing this letter to apprise you that I got an offer for a job which i applied for past 1 year. You will be happy to know that i will join this organisation next month. I keen to tell about this job. This is my dream job as you will remeber that we both played in our child hood with cars and trucks. Thats the reason, i had decided that one day i will be a truck driver. In australia there are lots of benefits to a trolley drivers such as, accomodation facility, insurance, education sponsership for children and much more. As you know that in my country there is no future of a driver. Moreover, people have no respect towards this occupation. Furthermore, they think that this is a low level job. This is the reason i cannot work here. Actually, I would like a question to ask from you how is the weather at there? , what kind of peaple living there? I have listen that people are very co-operative at there. They give respect to everyone next they have feeling for humanity. I will waiting for your reply and hope you will come to receive me at the airport. Give my regards to your parents. Your lovinglyJohn

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