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request a friend to bring sth for you

request a friend to bring sth for you 2aR2b

Hello dear Farzad, Hope you are doing well. I'm doing fine though I miss home and my family, I heard that you are coming to my city and I am very glad for this due to several reasons, at first it seems ages since we last saw each other so we can spend time together and I will show you all over the city, in the other hand I have a favor to ask you and I hope you don't mind. In fact I need a few things from my parents' house, and I'd be so grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase. There are some things that I have not brought with myself because I didn't expect this early winter here. So the first thing is my jacket, as you know winter clothes are very expensive here – don't worry, it's not heavy. The second thing is a packet of those spices from the famous ALVY shop. As you know those hand-made spices are not found anywhere. I do hope that is manageable for you, as it won't take up much space at all. In the meantime, I'm very excited about seeing you at the airport on Monday midday, I'll be in the arrivals hall, wearing my green coat.

Hello dear Possible spelling mistake found.Farad
Farzad
,

Hope you are doing well.

I'm doing fine though I miss home and my family, I heard that you are coming to my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).city, and
city and
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad for this due to several reasons, at first
 it seems ages since we last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 each other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can spend time together and I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 you all over the city, in the other hand I have a favor to ask you and I hope you don't mind. In The comma is probably missing here: "fact, I".fact, I
fact I
 need a few things from my parents' This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, and I'd be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 things that I have not brought with myself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 this early winter here. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 the first
 thing is my jacket, as you know winter clothes are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 expensive here Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 don't worry, it's not heavy. The second thing is a packet of those spices from the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
Possible spelling mistake found.AllyAlvaALVAVYALV YAlby
ALVY
 shop. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know those hand-made spices are not found anywhere.

I do hope that is
 manageable for you, as it won't take up much space at all. In the meantime, I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited about seeing you at the airport on Monday midday, I'll be in the Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "arrivals'" or "arrival's"?arrivals'arrival's
arrivals
 hall, wearing my green coat. 