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letter for having a job in a magazine

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Distinguished Mr John Sullivan, I am writing this letter to you as a person who had classes in Spanish Literature and had graduated from the university a few weeks ago. I had seen the ad, which advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. I am the one who can be the person you are looking for as a Spanish instructor. As I said before, I had graduated really short time ago and this can be my first job after graduation. I had a professional education in this area and I had some short-time experiences in well-known magazines such as Press VIP throughout my education. However, I have never had a full-time job in this profession so far, and this can be the first one. I am one of your followers of this magazine. I would be pretty appreciated if I would have this job. I believe in that I have plenty of things which I can learn from you and I can give some tips to improve this magazine, and I can be the best as an instructor. Furthermore, I hope you will be back as soon as possible and here is my mail address to have contact " ahvşdfhş@gmail. com ". Have a good day, Jeremy.

Distinguished Mr John Sullivan,

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 day,

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