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You have been invited to give a talk about your home country at a local community college in America. Write a letter to the secretary of the college in your letter Accept the invitation and offer a possible date for the discussion Summarise what information you will include in the talk Say which equipments you will need from the college for the talk

Dear sir/madam, I am thankful that you have considered me and given me a chance to talk about my country and expressed my National in your institution. I have a golden chance to share some words for my Nation and I accepted this offer but I have a lot of submission work this month for last year projects. if you have no problem so can we arrange next month? After this month I have no work between the dates 1 to 14 Feb. We will set up this program on this date. In this event, I am planning to talk about my country's culture, traditions and Flag. How to improve the education system in the last 10 year. I think I will share something about short films so They can easily understand. I will also cover some state traditions and festivals. Moreover, I am talking about the National Flag. what is the meaning of the colour of Flag? I really appreciate it if you can talk to the administrative department to arrange some equipment like laptop, Projector, indian Flag and Map. Apart from that I would also need a collar mic and speakers so they can hear gracefully. Your sincerely Hemang Patel

Dear sir/madam,

I am thankful that you have considered me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 me a chance to talk about my country and expressed my National in your institution.

I have a golden chance to share This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 words for my Nation and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 this offer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 submission work this month for last year projects. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.If
if
 you have no problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 can we arrange next
 month? “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 this month I have no work between the dates 1 to 14 Feb. We will set up this program on this date.

In this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
, I am planning to talk about my country's culture, traditions and Flag. How to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the education system in the last 10 year. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will share something about short films This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 They can easily
 understand. I will also
 cover This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 state traditions and festivals. Moreover
, I am talking about the National Flag. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.What
what
 is the meaning of the Possible spelling mistake. ‘colour’ is British English.color
colour
 of Flag?

I really
 appreciate it if you can talk to the administrative department to arrange This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 equipment like laptop, Projector, Possible spelling mistake found.IndianIndiaIndianaIndiansINDIAmedian
indian
 Flag and Map. Apart from that I would also
 need a collar mic and speakers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they can hear gracefully
.

Your sincerely


Possible spelling mistake found.Hem ang
Hemang
 Patel