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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood • suggest a possible solution to the problem

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my concern over the planned construction of an airport in my city. I am the resident of Lajpat Nagar of Ambala. I came to know about the upcoming construction through a newspaper dated 23 rd January. As the city is already congested as well as have huge inflow of traffic from different cities which cause the situation of traffic jam every evening. The construction of an airport in the city will create huge problems for the residents such as noise from the flights and town is even suffering from lack of open spaces. I would like to suggest to reconsider the plan and to shift it to the suburbs of the city as it will be in separate area away from the city. Looking forward to early resolution of this matter. Yours Sincerely Xyz
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my concern over the planned construction of an airport in my city. I am the resident of
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Lajpat
Nagar of
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Ambala
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
came to know about the upcoming construction through a newspaper dated
Did you mean “23rd”?
23 rd
January.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
the city is already congested
as well
as have huge inflow of traffic from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
which cause the situation of traffic jam every evening. The construction of an airport in the city will create huge problems for the residents such as noise from the flights and town is even suffering from lack of open spaces.

I would like to
The verb ‘suggest’ is used with the gerund form: “suggest reconsidering”.
suggest to reconsider
the plan and to shift it to the suburbs of the city as it will be in separate area away from the city.

Looking forward to early resolution of this matter.

Yours
Sincerely


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Xyz

IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood • suggest a possible solution to the problem

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  American English
6 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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