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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this

Dear Sir, I am writing to highlight the incorrect detail stated in the newspaper dated 23rd of February. As I am the resident of this city from past 25years, I know about each and everything in and around the city. The edition printed on 23rd February has the wrong detail about the city of the Rock Garden, it was mentioned the town it was situated as Zirakpur whereas it is was established in Chandigarh. The article where I found this misguided information is in the HT City under the heading of” know more about your tourist places”. As a awared resident of the town I would request you to kindly correct this detail and publish this in next edition as a correction. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Sincerely Xyz.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to highlight the incorrect detail stated in the newspaper dated 23rd of February. As I am the resident of this city from past 25years, I know about each and everything in and around the city.

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 edition as a correction.

Looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours Sincerely


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IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

131 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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