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You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam.

You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam. VAR3

Dear Madam, The purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that I am going to apply for the Masters in Human Resource Management to a very prestigious Management school. . I was invited for student faculty interview as part of admission process. Unfortunately I was not able to come at the appointed time. I forgot about my appointment with my doctor that already fixed one month back. I have to get my routine medical test done they already delayed for months. I apologize for such a mix up. I hope i can appear for this interview some other time according to feasibility. I am free for next 4 days, so i am ok with any time in upcoming days. Please let me know according to your schedule. I have queries regarding the interview mainly the total duration of interview. Is there any written test. when I can get the results. I await a positive response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully Siddharth Bakshi

Dear Madam,

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let
 you know that I am going to apply for the Masters in Human Resource Management to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 prestigious Management school. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
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 for student faculty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
 as part of admission process. Unfortunately I was not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 at the appointed time. I forgot about my appointment with my doctor that already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 one month back. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my routine medical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 done they already delayed for months.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 apologize for such a mix up. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope Did you mean "I"?I
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 can appear for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
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some
 other time according to feasibility. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am free for next
 4 days, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 am ok with any time in upcoming days. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know according to your schedule. I have queries regarding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
mainly
 the total duration of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
. Is there any written This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the results. I await a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
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Bakshi