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You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam.

You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam. VAR3
Dear Madam, The purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that I am going to apply for the Masters in Human Resource Management to a very prestigious Management school. . I was invited for student faculty interview as part of admission process. Unfortunately I was not able to come at the appointed time. I forgot about my appointment with my doctor that already fixed one month back. I have to get my routine medical test done they already delayed for months. I apologize for such a mix up. I hope i can appear for this interview some other time according to feasibility. I am free for next 4 days, so i am ok with any time in upcoming days. Please let me know according to your schedule. I have queries regarding the interview mainly the total duration of interview. Is there any written test. when I can get the results. I await a positive response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully Siddharth Bakshi
Dear Madam,

The purpose of writing this letter is to
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you know that I am going to apply for the Masters in Human Resource Management to a
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very
prestigious Management school.
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I
was invited
for student faculty
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interview
as part of admission process. Unfortunately I was not able to
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come
at the appointed time. I forgot about my appointment with my doctor that already
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fixed
one month back. I
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have to
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get
my routine medical
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test
done they already delayed for months.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
apologize for such a mix up.
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I
hope
Did you mean "I"?
i
can appear for this
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interview
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some
other time according to feasibility.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am free for
next
4 days,
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so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am ok with any time in upcoming days.
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Please
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let
me know according to your schedule. I have queries regarding the
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interview
mainly
the total duration of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. Is there any written
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test
.
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when
I can
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get
the results. I await a
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positive
response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
Siddharth
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Bakshi

IELTS letter You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program Apologize and offer to come at a different time Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam.

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168 words
6.0
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