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You will have a speech about your country on the international college event. Write a letter to the event’s planners about the following: - Ask about the date of the event - What speech you prepared/why it should be interesting -What equipment you will need for your speech

You will have a speech about your country on the international college event. Write a letter to the event’s planners about the following: - Ask about the date of the event - What speech you prepared/why it should be interesting -What equipment you will need for your speech 2bKWb
My name is Ana Popescu and I am enrolled in the first year at Music Faculty. I am writing to you regarding the invitation I have recently received from the Dean to deliver a speech about my country on the international college event. I would kindly ask you about the date of the event, since the Dean could not give me this information. I have prepared a speech about Romanian folk music and its influences on the classical music in Romania. George Enescu and Bela Bartok are two famous Romanian composers, well-known all over the world. However, many people do not know much about the traditional music used by them in their classical works. For example, Enescu’s Romanian Rhapsody no. 1 is based on a collection of folk themes, the most famous one being “The Lark”. To put it short, I believe this topic will be of much interest for the audience. In addition, I would kindly ask you to provide me with a high quality audio-video system. This will help me to support my speech with relevant examples. Thank you for your consideration and support. I look forward to hearing from you.
My name is Ana
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have prepared a speech about Romanian folk
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and its influences on the classical
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in Romania. George
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Romanian composers, well-known all over the world.
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Enescu
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is based
on a collection of folk themes, the most
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one being “The Lark”. To put it short, I believe this topic will be of much interest for the audience.

In addition
, I would kindly ask you to provide me with a high quality audio-video system. This will
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help
me to support my speech with relevant examples.

Thank you for your consideration and support. I look forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter You will have a speech about your country on the international college event. Write a letter to the event’s planners about the following: - Ask about the date of the event - What speech you prepared/why it should be interesting -What equipment you will need for your speech

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4 paragraphs
193 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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