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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job MMW1Q
Dear Alex, I hope you’re doing well. I am writing this letter in response to your request letter which I received, last week. Recently, I got to know about a job in an organization in my area, and they are looking for a software developer who can work in front-end and back-end development. In addition, you will need to provide support to existing clients. In my point of view, this job is really suitable for you because you have majored in computer science. Also, you can work in multiple technologies such as artificial intelligence and machine learning, which will be advantageous for a company. Furthermore, they are offering a good package, which I think you cannot get anywhere else. There are many ways to apply for this job. Firstly, you can apply directly on their website. Secondly, you can send your updated resume to me, I will apply on behalf of you. Lastly, there is a consultancy who can not only help you to apply but also, they will help you to get this job. I hope the aforementioned information will help you. Just let me know if you need anything on my end. Best Regards, Peter
Dear Alex,

I hope you’re doing well. I am writing this letter in response to your request letter which I received, last week.

Recently, I
got
to know about a job in an organization in my area, and they are looking for a software developer who can work in front-
end
and back-
end
development.
In addition
, you will need to provide support to existing clients.

In my point of view, this job is
really
suitable for you
because
you have majored in computer science.
Also
, you can work in multiple technologies such as artificial intelligence and machine learning, which will be advantageous for a
company
.
Furthermore
, they are offering a
good
package, which I
think
you cannot
get
anywhere else.

There are
many
ways to
apply
for this job.
Firstly
, you can
apply
directly
on their website.
Secondly
, you can
send
your updated resume to me, I will
apply
on behalf of you.
Lastly
, there is a consultancy who can not
only
help
you to
apply
but
also
, they will
help
you to
get
this job.

I hope the aforementioned information will
help
you.
Just
let
me know if you need anything on my
end
.

Best Regards,

Peter
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IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
196 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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