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formal immigration letter

Dear Madam/Sir Well, I am eventually pleased that I am writing this Immigration Reference Letter on behalf of both my brothers- Mohanad Bajbouj and Issa Bajbouj. My name is Fadi Bajbouj, I am a Syrian refugee in Canada, and it is a privilege for me that I have two brothers living in Malaysia. I really consider them as a kind and respectable men. To begin with my brother Mohanad. He is an IT Engineer, majoring in Software Programming and System management. He has been living in Malaysia since 2011. Along with it, his wife also IT engineer, majoring in Data Analyze and Network Systems. They have three children which are eight-year-old, 6-year-old and 1-year -old. Mohanad and his family are refugees in Malaysia and don’t have visa. Therefore, they can’t work in their specialties. Owing to that Malaysia does not give any right for refugees, his children cannot enroll to government schools. Although, there are a lot of international schools instead, but these are too expensive. Thereby, he cannot provide tuition fees for his children. Even he and his wife have high-level degrees, they are unable to help themselves and their family. In other words, his life is very difficult. Secondly, my brother Issa Bajbouj has been living in Malaysia Since 2012. He had been studying Business Management in Damascus University, he had been in the fourth year before the war started in Syria. Then he left his University without obtaining his academic certificate and traveled to Malaysia to be beside his brother Mohanad, Issa’s wife also had been studying English in the second year. Both of them were not able to continue their academies. Issa also a refugee in Malaysia. Briefly, Issa’s situation is similar to that of his brother Mohanad, he is as his brother suffering from the same problems and obstacles. Moreover, Mohanad and his wife are wonderful personalities. They are hardworking and carrying as well. They are looking for basic requirements insurance and respectable safe living for their families. That’s why it is a great honor for me to consider them. You can contact me for further information. I look forward to hearing from you.

Dear Madam/Sir

Well, I am eventually
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 that I am writing this Immigration Reference Letter on behalf of both my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brothers-
 Mohanad Bajbouj and Issa Bajbouj.

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refugee
 in Canada, and it is a privilege for me that I have two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brothers
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living
 in Malaysia. I really
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men
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begin
 with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 Mohanad. He is an IT Engineer, majoring in Software Programming and System management. He has been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
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 IT engineer, majoring in Data Analyze and Network Systems. They have three children which are eight-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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, 6-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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. Mohanad and his family are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeigneralienexileexpatriatedisplaced personemigrant
refugees
 in Malaysia and don’t have visa. Therefore
, they can’t work in their specialties. Owing to that Malaysia does not give any right for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeigneralienexileexpatriatedisplaced personemigrant
refugees
, his children cannot enroll to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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a lot of
 international schools instead
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but
 these are too expensive. Thereby, he cannot provide tuition fees for his children. Even he and his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpartnerbrideroommatespousecompanion
wife
 have high-level degrees, they are unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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Secondly
, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 Issa Bajbouj has been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in Malaysia Since 2012. He had been studying Business Management in Damascus University, he had been in the fourth year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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started
 in Syria. Then he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 his University without obtaining his academic certificate and traveled to Malaysia to be beside his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 Mohanad, Issa’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpartnerbrideroommatespousecompanion
wife
also
 had been studying English in the second year. Both of them were not able to continue their academies. Issa also
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeigneralienexileexpatriatedisplaced personemigrant
refugee
 in Malaysia. Briefly
, Issa’s situation is similar to that of his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 Mohanad, he is as his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 suffering from the same problems and obstacles.

Moreover
, Mohanad and his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpartnerbrideroommatespousecompanion
wife
 are wonderful personalities. They are hardworking and carrying as well
. They are looking for basic requirements insurance and respectable safe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 for their families. That’s why it is a great honor for me to consider them. You can contact me for further
 information.

I look forward to hearing from you. 