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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do - explain what the company could do to help you - say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Mr. Koessner, I am writing this letter to bring to your attention my interest in a one-month tourism course that may be beneficial for my career. To be more specific, this course is focused on the modern marketing methods of the Tourism industry and takes place in the building of the Tourism Ministry. Let me explain to you in more detail. The course sessions are held on the even days of July and are unfortunately overlapped with my working hours in the office; therefore, I was wondering if you would mind allowing me to leave the office three hours sooner on even days of July. Besides, to participate in the aforementioned course, a reference letter from the applicants’ current employers is obligatory; thus, I would like to ask for a reference letter with a stamp and your signature if possible. Last but not least, considering the content of the course, I highly believe that it would be advantageous not only to me; but also to the company. The reason is that this course would enable me to enhance my marketing skills and makes me able to attract more clients in the long term. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Mehdi Rasoolniya
Dear Mr. Koessner,

I am writing this letter to bring to your attention my interest in a one-month tourism
course
that may be beneficial for my career. To be more specific, this
course
is focused
on the modern marketing methods of the Tourism industry and takes place in the building of the Tourism Ministry.

Let
me
explain
to you in more detail. The
course
sessions
are held
on the even days of July and are unfortunately overlapped with my working hours in the office;
therefore
, I was wondering if you would mind allowing me to
leave
the office three hours sooner on even days of July.
Besides
, to participate in the aforementioned
course
, a reference letter from the applicants’
current
employers is obligatory;
thus
, I would like to
ask for
a reference letter with a stamp and your signature if possible.

Last
but
not least, considering the content of the
course
, I
highly
believe that it would be advantageous not
only
to me;
but
also
to the
company
. The reason is that this
course
would enable me to enhance my marketing
skills
and
makes
me able to attract more clients in the long term.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


Mehdi Rasoolniya
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IELTS letter You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do - explain what the company could do to help you - say how the course will be useful for your job

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  American English
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204 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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