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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Director, I am writing in response to your request for volunteers. I am really keen to do this because I am a history buff and looking for interesting ways to keep myself busy during my retirement years. I believe this would also give me an opportunity to have more involvement in the community. I believe I have a number of skills that will be of value to the museum. First of all, I am an excellent public speaker and I believe this would be useful for seminars or tour groups. As well as this, I’m also computer savvy and able to complete technical tasks. I am available any time during the week. As I am an early bird, any type of hours in the morning or afternoon will suit me. However, I have to look after my grandchildren during weekends, so I am not available. I would appreciate discussing this with you further when time permits. Yours faithfully, Mike Wattie
Dear Director,

I am writing in response to your request for volunteers.

I am
really
keen to do this
because
I am a history buff and looking for interesting ways to
keep
myself busy during my retirement years. I believe this would
also
give me an opportunity to have more involvement in the community.

I believe I have a number of
skills
that will be of value to the museum.
First
of all, I am an excellent public speaker and I believe this would be useful for seminars or tour groups.
As well
as this, I’m
also
computer savvy and able to complete technical tasks.

I am available any time during the week. As I am an early bird, any type of hours in the morning or afternoon will suit me.
However
, I
have to
look after my grandchildren during weekends,
so
I am not available.

I would appreciate discussing this with you
further
when time permits.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mike Wattie
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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