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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do - explain what the company could do to help you - say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Reza, Before anything, I’d like to thank you for the perfect job you’ve offered me, but I’m afraid I can’t take it right now, for I just got hired by another company. To be honest, the big company you’ve founded had always been very inspiring to me, and I really wanted to work for you. What I’ve read about your firm recently is that you’re going to invest in designing an environmentally friendly sedan car that functions with water, which is adorable! If I hadn’t joined my current employer, I would have definitely accepted your offer. Unfortunately, your job offer came up a little bit late when I had already signed a contract. To be more clear, there is a clause in this document which clearly prohibits me from joining another organisation in the same field for at least three months, so I can’t even resign to join you. In the end, I thank you one more time for the generous offer, but as I mentioned above there is no way I can take this opportunity since I’m commited to another corporation. Please feel free to contact me with any other issues. Your friend Mehdi
Dear Reza,

Before
anything, I’d like to thank you for the perfect job you’ve offered me,
but
I’m afraid I can’t take it right
now
, for I
just
got
hired by another
company
.

To be honest, the
big
company
you’ve founded had always been
very
inspiring to me, and I
really
wanted to work for you. What I’ve read about your firm recently is that you’re going to invest in designing an
environmentally
friendly sedan car that functions with water, which is adorable! If I hadn’t
joined
my
current
employer, I would have definitely
accepted
your offer.

Unfortunately, your job offer came up a
little
bit late when I had already signed a contract. To be more
clear
, there is a clause in this document which
clearly
prohibits me from joining another organisation in the same field for at least three months,
so
I can’t even resign to
join
you.

In the
end
, I thank you one more time for the generous offer,
but
as I mentioned above there is no way I can take this opportunity since I’m commited to another corporation.

Please
feel free to contact me with any other issues.

Your friend

Mehdi
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IELTS letter You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do - explain what the company could do to help you - say how the course will be useful for your job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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