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I am writing to you to express my displeasure with furnitures in your apartment which we have rented.While the dining table looks exquisite, I am facing issue with it being slippery.

I am writing to you to express my displeasure with furnitures in your apartment which we have rented. While the dining table looks exquisite, I am facing issue with it being slippery. OVwVG
I am writing to you to express my displeasure with furnitures in your apartment which we have rented. While the dining table looks exquisite, It has problems making it difficult to be used If you could not remember me, I am Sabari from India and I recently moved into the flat opposite to yours. Furthermore, During your first visit to my apartment, we had a long discussion on the pet related rules enforced by the flat members association. As mentioned earlier, The dining table is slippery due to which every time a utensil is placed, it slides off. I think the issue is with the texture of the wood on the table top which has eroded owing to its age. Would you be able to send a carpenter to look into the issue? I request you to have the furniture repaired at the earliest. However, if it can not be repaired, kindly have the wooden part replaced. Thank you for being considerate. Yours faithfully, Sabari Raja A R
I am writing to you to express my displeasure with
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furnitures
in your apartment which we have rented. While the dining table looks exquisite, It has problems making it difficult to be
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used


If you could not remember me, I am
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Sabari
from India and I recently
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moved
into the flat opposite to yours.
Furthermore
, During your
first
visit to my apartment, we had a long discussion on the pet related
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rules
enforced by the flat
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members
association.

As mentioned earlier, The dining table is slippery due to which every time a utensil
is placed
, it slides off. I
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think
the issue is with the texture of the wood on the
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table top
which has eroded owing to its age.

Would you be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a carpenter to look into the issue? I request you to have the furniture repaired at the earliest.
However
, if it can not
be repaired
, kindly have the wooden part replaced.

Thank you for being considerate.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Sabari
Raja A R
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IELTS letter I am writing to you to express my displeasure with furnitures in your apartment which we have rented. While the dining table looks exquisite, I am facing issue with it being slippery.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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