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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Sir/Madam, I have received your letter regarding the inconvenience that you are encountering in late evenings due to the noise from my flat. Let me explain the situation. The roof ceiling in my bedroom is having cracks and there is water leakage when it rains. So I was in a situation to fix it as early as possible and I requested the workers to carry on with the concrete demolition and replacement until 8pm everyday. I understand this is creating lot of noise which is frustrating for all of you especially for those who are staying with little ones. I strongly apologise for the inconvenience caused. Going forward, I will ensure to end up daily renovation work before 6pm. Also no work will be done during Sunday's. This is expected to be completed by next week. Thank you so much for your patience and co-opearation on this matter. Yours Sincerely, Srujan
Dear Sir/Madam,

I have received your letter regarding the inconvenience that you are encountering in late evenings due to the noise from my flat.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the situation. The roof ceiling in my bedroom is having cracks and there is water leakage when it rains.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I was in a situation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it as early as
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
possible and
I requested the workers to carry on with the concrete demolition and replacement until 8pm
‘Everyday’ is an adjective. Did you mean “every day”?
everyday
.

I understand this is creating lot of noise which is frustrating for all of you
especially
for those who are staying with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
ones. I
strongly
Possible spelling mistake. ‘apologise’ is British English.
apologise
for the inconvenience caused.

Going forward, I will ensure to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
up daily renovation work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
6pm.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
no work will
be done
during Sunday's. This is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to
be completed
by
next
week. Thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much for your patience and
Possible spelling mistake found.
co-opearation
on this matter.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Srujan

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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