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You have arranged a weekend holiday with Mia and Lana, but due to your studies you will not be able to go with them. Write a letter and apologize.

You have arranged a weekend holiday with Mia and Lana, but due to your studies you will not be able to go with them. Write a letter and apologize. GGPj
Dear Mia and Lana, I am writing this to inform you that I will not be able to join you for the weekend holiday getaway we planned a week ago. When we initially planned this holiday, my schedule for the week was supposed to be clear. But just today one of my professors announced an upcoming test that is scheduled of the very next day after the weekend. The test is an important one and I have to prepare well for it so I will have to cancel any plans I had for the weekend, including our threesome night at Mia Khalifa’s place. I know that you both were looking forward to this, so I apologize for cancelling the plan last moment from the bottom of my heart. Although, I have test next week on Monday I will be free the next weekend due to the semester break. I would love to hang out with you next week. I know that the lodge we booked is not available for the next weekend, however, we could all just go for trekking next week. Do let me know if you are available next week and sorry for the trouble again. Best wishes, Ishan
Dear Mia and Lana,

I am writing this to inform you that I will not be able to
join
you for the
weekend
holiday getaway we planned a
week
ago.

When we
initially
planned this holiday, my schedule for the
week
was supposed
to be
clear
.
But
just
today
one of my professors announced an upcoming
test
that
is scheduled
of the
very
next
day after the
weekend
. The
test
is an
important
one and I
have to
prepare well for it
so
I will
have to
cancel any plans I had for the
weekend
, including our threesome night at Mia Khalifa’s place.

I know that you both were looking forward to this,
so
I apologize for cancelling the plan last moment from the bottom of my heart.

Although
, I have
test
next
week
on Monday I will be free the
next
weekend
due to the semester break. I would
love
to hang out with you
next
week
. I know that the lodge we booked is not available for the
next
weekend
,
however
, we could all
just
go for trekking
next
week.

Do
let
me know if you are available
next
week
and sorry for the trouble again.

Best wishes,

Ishan
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IELTS letter You have arranged a weekend holiday with Mia and Lana, but due to your studies you will not be able to go with them. Write a letter and apologize.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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