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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend: in your letter. Say whether you Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend: in your letter. Say whether you Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer x3jy
Dear Thomson, How are you and how is your family doing? I hope everything is fine there. I am writing this letter to give you few tips that might come into handy while you are on your camping. Firstly, I would like to tell you that going out camping will be of a good experience to you. I personally know your adventurous side and forest camping will provide you with everything you are looking for. Clean fresh air, clear rivers, cooking in the wild, watching different animals and birds will definitely intrigue you a lot, and for this reason I am confident that you will enjoy it. Secondly, I also want to tell you about some of the possible disadvantages and dangers. As you know, electricity will not be available, so don’t forget to carry your travel charger. Insects and mosquitoes are other thing to be concerned about, so don’t forget to have insect repellent by your side. Also always stay close to the crew, as dangers of encountering wild animals is more likely. Finally, I want to say that, I am very excited for you and would like to tag along, if you or your crew do not have any objection and still have space available. I wish you all the best for your trip and hope you have the best time of your life. Best wishes and love, Vector.
Dear Thomson,

How are you and how is your family doing? I hope everything is fine there. I am writing this letter to give you few tips that might
come
into handy while you are on your camping.

Firstly
, I would like to
tell
you that going out camping will be of a
good
experience to you. I
personally
know your adventurous side and forest camping will provide you with everything you are looking for. Clean fresh air,
clear
rivers, cooking in the wild, watching
different
animals and birds will definitely intrigue you a lot, and
for this reason
I am confident that you will enjoy it.

Secondly
, I
also
want to
tell
you about
some of the
possible disadvantages and
dangers
. As you know, electricity will not be available,
so
don’t forget to carry your travel charger. Insects and mosquitoes are other thing to
be concerned
about,
so
don’t forget to have insect repellent by your side.
Also
always stay close to the crew, as
dangers
of encountering wild animals is more likely.

Finally
, I want to say that, I am
very
excited for you and would like to tag along, if you or your crew do not have any objection and
still
have space available.

I wish you all the best for your trip and hope you have the best time of your life.

Best wishes and
love
,

Vector.
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend: in your letter. Say whether you Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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  American English
8 paragraphs
231 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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