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Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year. Include - What you did - What you think you could improve - A training request

Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year. Include - What you did - What you think you could improve - A training request gMja

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about my project work that I did last year in the company. First and foremost, I would like to give a brief detail about the wireless high-density project which you assigned me in July, 2020. The project was divided into 4 different tasks, and I was given surveying responsibility. I performed the site survey using WI-FI analyzer tool to check the network parameters. I was able to take all the readings from the tool during the weekends and compared it with its original value. Although all the results came out well, the detailed analysis of the project was denied due to unknown reasons by the management. If I were permitted to take readings on weekdays, a detailed review of that would have been done. Further, I would like to request to you to provide me Ekahau software training, which is generally given to the managers, in order to gain some experience in establishing wireless infrastructure at the client’s office. I would really appreciate your help, if you could arrange this training next month. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sarah Browns

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 work that I did last year in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
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 software training, which is generally
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given
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some
 experience in establishing wireless infrastructure at the client’s office. I would really
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help
, if you could arrange this training next
 month.

Looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Sarah Browns