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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to 12 th March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to 12 th March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management. JPe6
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to 12 th March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management. Despite my leave from office, I will check my emails daily, respond to important ones and be available for emergency phone calls. Besides, I have already handed over my tasks to Mr. Smith and I will be ready to assist him over call if needed. I realise my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office but in the long run, company will be benefited from my knowledge as we have lot of projects based on financial domain. I can take up leadership roles in future as I am having expertize in finace and management. I am looking forward for your approval for the leave. Yours faithfully, Ginu Thoams
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to
Did you mean "12th"?
12 th
March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management.

Despite my
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leave
from office, I will
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check
my emails daily, respond to
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important
ones and be available for emergency phone calls.
Besides
, I have already handed over my tasks to Mr. Smith and I will be ready to assist him over call if needed.

I
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realise
my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office
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but
in the long run,
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company
will
be benefited
from my knowledge as we have
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lot of
projects based on financial domain. I can take up leadership roles in future as I am having
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expertize
in
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finace
and management.

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I
am looking forward for your approval for the
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leave
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ginu
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Thoams

IELTS letter Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to 12 th March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management.

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150 words
6.0
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