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My name is Alina, your neighbour from the second floor. I have recieved recently your letter regarding the noise coming from my house.

My name is Alina, your neighbour from the second floor. I have recieved recently your letter regarding the noise coming from my house. 5xgP

Dear Mr. and Ms. Smith, Hope you are doing well. My name is Alina, your neighbour from the second floor. I have recieved recently your letter regarding the noise coming from my house. First of all, I would like to apologise for the inconveniance. The noise is caused by us replacing the old air conditioners in the living room and the kithchen. The works are almost done, we will need one more day. I will ask the technician to come tomorrow early to complete the work before evening. thank you for understanding. Best Regards, Alina Alfandi

Dear Mr. and Ms. Smith,

Hope you are doing well.

My name is Alina, your Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
 from the second floor. I have Possible spelling mistake found.receivedrelieved
recieved
 recently your letter regarding the noise coming from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I would like to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for the Possible spelling mistake found.inconvenience
inconveniance
.

The noise is caused
 by us replacing the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 air conditioners in the living room and the Possible spelling mistake found.kitchen
kithchen
. The works are almost done, we will need one more day. I will ask the technician to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 tomorrow early to complete the work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 evening.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThank
thank
 you for understanding.

Best Regards,

Alina Possible spelling mistake found.AfghaniAlphardALADIÅland
Alfandi

IELTS letter My name is Alina, your neighbour from the second floor. I have recieved recently your letter regarding the noise coming from my house.

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

95 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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