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enrollment in computer course

enrollment in computer course Jokm5

Dear sir / madam, I’m writing this letter as per I saw your advertisement regarding computer course in a magazine. I feel myself really enthusiast to enroll into his course because I want to enhance my abilities in computer field. As you known it is the era of IT and digitalization and who are not enhancing their abilities in this field cannot survive in future. As you mentioned pre- requisite of this course, only for those people who have completed an elementary course. But I have done my master’s in business administration and I have no prior degree related to computer. Please discuss and consider my situation internally and let me know if I am eligible to enroll into your course. I’m looking forward a positive and kind response from your side. I would highly appreciate your kind guidance and help. Please inform me as per your decision. You’re faithful Shazzah naeem

Dear sir / madam,

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saw
 your advertisement regarding computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 in a magazine. I feel myself really
 enthusiast to enroll into his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to enhance my abilities in computer field. As you Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "knew"?knew
known
 it is the era of IT and digitalization and who are not enhancing their abilities in this field cannot survive Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
.

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pre
- requisite of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who have completed an elementary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I have done my master’s in business administration and I have no prior degree related to computer.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 discuss and consider my situation internally
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if I am eligible to enroll into your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. I’m looking forward a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and kind response from your side. I would highly
 appreciate your kind guidance and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 inform me as per your decision.

You’re faithful

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