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Write an email to a friend about a holiday experience you didn't enjoy

Write an email to a friend about a holiday experience you didn't enjoy domeX
Hi Pedro, how are you today. Remember that yesterday I returned of my holiday, it was terrible. I was my first time on cruise and all the time a felt dizzy, I couldn't sleep and eat. when we arrived to Aruba I was happy, we knew the island and we were in the beach but when we went again to the cruise I had lost my passport so I couldn't enter to the cruise, my mother has to be with me and reserved a hotel. Netx morning we took a flight to Colombia.
Hi Pedro, how are you
today
. Remember that yesterday I returned of my holiday, it was terrible. I was my
first
time on cruise and all the time a felt dizzy, I couldn't sleep and eat.
when
we arrived to Aruba I was happy, we knew the
island and
we were in the beach
but
when we went again to the cruise I had lost my passport
so
I couldn't enter to the cruise, my mother
has to
be with me and reserved a hotel.
Netx
morning we took a flight to Colombia.
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IELTS letter Write an email to a friend about a holiday experience you didn't enjoy

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  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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