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Write an email to a friend about a holiday experience you didn't enjoy

Write an email to a friend about a holiday experience you didn't enjoy domeX

Hi Pedro, how are you today. Remember that yesterday I returned of my holiday, it was terrible. I was my first time on cruise and all the time a felt dizzy, I couldn't sleep and eat. when we arrived to Aruba I was happy, we knew the island and we were in the beach but when we went again to the cruise I had lost my passport so I couldn't enter to the cruise, my mother has to be with me and reserved a hotel. Netx morning we took a flight to Colombia.

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 morning we took a flight to Colombia. 