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Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to complain about the late night noises coming from your home. I live in house number 271 which is next to yours. I have been facing this problem for about one month. Sometimes the volume of your television is too high, while at other times the noise of late night parties is creating trouble for me. I am a student and a part-time worker. Actually, I have to study late into the night because my exams are coming up next month. I wouldn’t have bothered to write if I didn’t have exams coming up. I am in no way trying to interfere in your personal affairs, but I would really appreciate it if you could reduce the volume of your TV at night and it would be great if you could also postpone any parties you are planning to organize this month or next month. I hope you will understand my situation. Thank you for your consideration Yours sincerely, XYZ

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to complain about the late You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 noises coming from your home. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 number 271 which is next
 to yours. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been facing this problem for about one month.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 the volume of your television is too high, while at other times the noise of late You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 parties is creating trouble for me. I am a student and a part-time worker. Actually, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study late into the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my exams are coming up next
 month. I wouldn’t have bothered to write if I didn’t have exams coming up.

I am in no way trying to interfere in your personal affairs, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I would really
 appreciate it if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the volume of your TV at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 and it would be great if you could also
 postpone any parties you are planning to organize this month or next
 month.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you will understand my situation.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours sincerely
,

XYZ