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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbor. 150 words

You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbor. 150 words 562En
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Austria, I am writing this letter to inform you that we are affecting with the loud sounds namely; drilling, hammering, and noise of the workers. We tried to tolerate, however, it is 5 days for now we are suffering in annoying unnecessary sound until late night in the evening. In addition to this, my two children are doing online class. Indeed, they can't focus in their studies. Furthermore, I have a two year old baby. On the other hand, already discussed to you previous day verbally. Kindly finish your working hours at 5: 00 in the afternoon. Despite of disturbing sound pollutions we will try to understand your situation that you need to accomplish your project. Likewise, pay attention to our concerns. Otherwise we will take action to report to the Real State Management. I am looking forward for your cooperation regarding this matter. Yours truly, Rose Villa
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Austria, I am writing this letter to inform you that we are affecting with the loud sounds
namely
; drilling, hammering, and noise of the workers. We tried to tolerate,
however
, it is 5 days for
now
we are suffering in annoying unnecessary sound until late night in the evening.
In addition
to this, my two children are doing online
class
.
Indeed
, they can't
focus in
their studies.
Furthermore
, I have a two year
old
baby.

On the other hand
, already discussed to you previous day
verbally
. Kindly finish your working hours at 5: 00 in the afternoon.
Despite of
disturbing sound pollutions we will try to understand your situation that you need to accomplish your project.
Likewise
, pay attention to our concerns.
Otherwise
we will take action to report to the Real State Management.

I am looking forward for your cooperation regarding this matter.

Yours
truly
, Rose Villa
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IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbor. 150 words

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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