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My customer: VAN XUAN AGRICULTURAL PRODUCTS IMPORT EXPORT COMPANY LIMITED which has trading demand to uy carton boxes. This case was approval for trading (rating with GD):

My customer: VAN XUAN AGRICULTURAL PRODUCTS IMPORT EXPORT COMPANY LIMITED which has trading demand to uy carton boxes. This case was approval for trading (rating with GD): JVlAk
Dear Mr. Robin, My customer: VAN XUAN AGRICULTURAL PRODUCTS IMPORT EXPORT COMPANY LIMITED which has trading demand to buy carton boxes. This case was approval for trading (rating with GD): + TE=100k + Goods: Solar panel and Inverter + Status: approval trading with condition no more apply this case within 10 months + Not yet disburse Tomorrow, this CA will expire, so I would like to apply trading case some reason as below: + Sales uptrend + They has cooperated with us since 2008 + Payment record: goods Although the pandemic happened, their company and corporate guarantor are still operating normally. Furthermore, I attach the preliminary financial checking. Please help me review and agree to send CF for a trading case( goods: carton boxes)
Dear Mr. Robin,

My customer: VAN
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XUAN
AGRICULTURAL PRODUCTS IMPORT EXPORT
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COMPANY
LIMITED which has
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trading
demand to
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buy
carton boxes.

This case was approval for
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trading
(rating with GD):

+ TE=100k

+
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Goods
: Solar panel and Inverter

+ Status: approval
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trading
with condition no more apply this case within 10 months

+ Not
yet
disburse

Tomorrow, this CA will expire,
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so
I would like to apply
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trading
case
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some
reason as below:

+ Sales uptrend

+ They
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has
cooperated with us since 2008

+ Payment record:
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods


Although the pandemic happened, their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and corporate guarantor are
still
operating
normally
.

Furthermore
, I attach the preliminary financial checking.
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Please
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help
me review and
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agree
to
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send
CF for a
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trading
case
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
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goods
: carton boxes)
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IELTS letter My customer: VAN XUAN AGRICULTURAL PRODUCTS IMPORT EXPORT COMPANY LIMITED which has trading demand to uy carton boxes. This case was approval for trading (rating with GD):

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13 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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