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They have good corporate Guarantor which is a good collection from buyers and good

They have good corporate Guarantor which is a good collection from buyers and good 7PJd3
Dear Mr. Robin, After convincing the customer, my customer would like to cooperate with us for 18 months. I would like to proposal as below: Approve My proposal Tenor 12 months Tenor 18 months TE= $60, 000 TE= $60, 000 As processing report, P. O’ opinion mention some strengths such as: +They have good corporate Guarantor which is a good collection from buyers and good + Average Monthly Sales can cover BEP + Payment from buyers covers 92% of VAT sales + They have clean mortgage assets=> they have large investments in fixed assets. I hope you reconsider and support my proposal.
Dear Mr. Robin,

After convincing the customer, my customer would like to cooperate with us for 18 months.

I would like to proposal as below:

Approve My proposal

Tenor 12 months Tenor 18 months

TE= $60, 000 TE= $60, 000

As processing report, P. O’ opinion mention
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some
strengths such as:

+They have
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good
corporate Guarantor which is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
collection from buyers and
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good


+ Average Monthly Sales can cover BEP

+ Payment from buyers covers 92% of VAT sales

+ They have clean mortgage assets
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=>
they have large investments in
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fixed
assets.

I hope you reconsider and support my proposal.
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IELTS letter They have good corporate Guarantor which is a good collection from buyers and good

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  American English
9 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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