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Write a letter for the manager of the hotel what the advantages and the disadvantages about the service in the hotel.

Write a letter for the manager of the hotel what the advantages and the disadvantages about the service in the hotel. YBB2n

Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to inform you the feedback that we can gave about your hotel services and some advice we suggest for your hotel in the future. As you know, We have a meeting yesterday in the hotel and it is running smoothly. The room of the hotel is nice and have a unique decoration. The participants says the room is clean and huge so we can have a nice meeting. The problem is the food is not that good. They were unhappy about the taste of the food. Some soup is tasteless and some of the seafood is not in a good condition. They were not fresh and still smell fishy. They also complain about the juice that they drink. They said the fruit is in a bad condition and some of them is too sour. However, not all the drink is bad, some of them is fine. But at the end we enjoyed the meal. Please make a change of the food next time. I suggest to buy a fresh fruit and vegetables. The seafood also need some of the other technic of cooking to make it not smell fishy. That is all my feedback for your hotel. Yours faithfully, Chelsea

Dear Sir or Madam,

I write this letter to inform you the feedback that we can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "give"give
gave
 about your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 services and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advice we suggest for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 in the future.

As you know, We have a meeting yesterday in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 and it is running smoothly
. The room of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 is nice and have a unique decoration. The participants You should probably use "say".say
says
 the room is clean and huge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can have a nice meeting.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 problem is the food is not that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. They were unhappy about the taste of the food. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 soup is tasteless and If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 seafood is not in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition. They were not fresh and still
 smell fishy. They also
 complain about the juice that they drink. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
 said the fruit is in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 condition and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them is too sour. However
, not all the drink is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them is fine. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 we enjoyed the meal.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of the food next
 time. I suggest to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a fresh fruit and vegetables. The seafood also
 need If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 other Possible spelling mistake found.ethnictechnicalmechanictechnotectonicechoic
technic
 of cooking to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it not smell fishy. That is
 all my feedback for your hotel.

Yours faithfully
,

Chelsea