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Write a letter for the manager of the hotel what the advantages and the disadvantages about the service in the hotel.

Write a letter for the manager of the hotel what the advantages and the disadvantages about the service in the hotel. YBB2n
Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to inform you the feedback that we can gave about your hotel services and some advice we suggest for your hotel in the future. As you know, We have a meeting yesterday in the hotel and it is running smoothly. The room of the hotel is nice and have a unique decoration. The participants says the room is clean and huge so we can have a nice meeting. The problem is the food is not that good. They were unhappy about the taste of the food. Some soup is tasteless and some of the seafood is not in a good condition. They were not fresh and still smell fishy. They also complain about the juice that they drink. They said the fruit is in a bad condition and some of them is too sour. However, not all the drink is bad, some of them is fine. But at the end we enjoyed the meal. Please make a change of the food next time. I suggest to buy a fresh fruit and vegetables. The seafood also need some of the other technic of cooking to make it not smell fishy. That is all my feedback for your hotel. Yours faithfully, Chelsea
Dear Sir or Madam,

I write this letter to inform you the feedback that we can
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gave
about your
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hotel
services and
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some
advice we suggest for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
in the future.

As you know, We have a meeting yesterday in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
and it is running
smoothly
. The room of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
is nice and have a unique decoration. The participants
You should probably use "say".
says
the room is clean and huge
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we can have a nice meeting.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
problem is the food is not that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. They were unhappy about the taste of the food.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
soup is tasteless and
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some of the
seafood is not in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition. They were not fresh and
still
smell fishy. They
also
complain about the juice that they drink.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
said the fruit is in a
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bad
condition and
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some
of them is too sour.
However
, not all the drink is
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bad
,
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some
of them is fine.
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But
at the
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end
we enjoyed the meal.

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Please
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make
a
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change
of the food
next
time. I suggest to
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buy
a fresh fruit and vegetables. The seafood
also
need
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
other
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technic
of cooking to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it not smell fishy.
That is
all my feedback for your hotel.

Yours
faithfully
,

Chelsea

IELTS letter Write a letter for the manager of the hotel what the advantages and the disadvantages about the service in the hotel.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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