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Letter to a friend visiting us this summer

Letter to a friend visiting us this summer VBKdm
Dear Dave I'm delighted to receive a letter about your staycation on this new year's eve with our family in Florida and indeed think, it would be an excellent opportunity for both of our families to mingle. As mentioned in your letter, you were bothered about getting a perfect hotel for your vacation and I would like to offer you to stay at my place so that we can help you with the amazing picnic and sight-seeing spots in the area. The must-visit place would be the pink sand beach obviously where you can soak in some sun and indulge yourself in water sports activities which are favorite for anyone visiting the area. The museum is another hot destination amongst the tourist, which showcase the history of the region and how it got free from the colonial rule of the British empire. Though the weather in the area remains sunny, at this time of the year, it is still advisable to carry a wet suit to avoid the drizzling which happens quite often in the evening time due to high humidity in this region. Although you’re well aware of pre-requisites for traveling with kids, I would still recommend carrying the swim-suits and mosquito repellent basis the skin type to avoid any allergies due to environment-related reasons. I look forward to seeing you soon in person and let me know your confirmed travel dates so that we can make the necessary arrangements beforehand. Warm Wishes, Michael Korrs
Dear Dave

I'm delighted to receive a letter about your
staycation
on this
new year's eve
with our family in Florida and
indeed
think
, it would be an excellent opportunity for both of our families to mingle.

As mentioned in your letter, you
were bothered
about getting a perfect hotel for your vacation and I would like to offer you to stay at my place
so
that we can
help
you with the amazing picnic and sight-seeing spots in the area. The
must
-visit place would be the pink sand beach
obviously
where you can soak in
some
sun and indulge yourself in water sports activities which are favorite for anyone visiting the area. The museum is another hot destination amongst the tourist, which showcase the history of the region and how it
got
free from the colonial
rule
of the
British empire
.

Though the weather in the area remains sunny, at this time of the year, it is
still
advisable to carry a wet suit to avoid the drizzling which happens quite
often
in the evening time due to high humidity in this region. Although you’re well aware of
pre-requisites
for traveling with kids, I would
still
recommend carrying the swim-suits and mosquito repellent basis the skin type to avoid any allergies due to environment-related reasons.

I look forward to seeing you
soon
in person and
let
me know your confirmed travel dates
so
that we can
make
the necessary arrangements beforehand.

Warm Wishes,

Michael
Korrs
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend visiting us this summer

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
245 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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