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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. • Give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. • Give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties NrP7q
Dear Alison, I hope this letter finds you in health. I am writing this letter to thank you for your kind and selfless offer to take care of my pet in my place while I am on my holiday. Plus, I would like you to be informed of some specific things about Lulu. First of all, she is a French Bulldog at age of 11 months who loves to eat organic food, therefore, I bought her a bag of Purina one and put it in the second cabinet to your left. Except for her unwillingness to take a bath, she will be a nice and calm girl. I have to add that I have purchased anything you might need to cook in advance and if you notice, you can see that the refrigerator is full. I have cleaned up the entire house and I have done the laundry too, so there is nothing for you to do, However, please vacuum the floor in case you drop any food because ants will take all over the house afterward to collect them. There is nothing left to say, so if you face any problems, please contact my hotel and ask for room 216. I will try to find a Wi-Fi connection and be in touch with you via WhatsApp. Hope to see you soon darling and thanks again. Lots of love, Saghar
Dear Alison,

I hope this letter finds you in health. I am writing this letter to thank you for your kind and selfless offer to take care of my pet in my place while I am on my holiday. Plus, I would like you to
be informed
of
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some
specific things about Lulu.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, she is a French Bulldog at age of 11 months who
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loves
to eat organic food,
therefore
, I
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bought
her a bag of Purina one and put it in the second cabinet to your
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left
.
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Except for
her unwillingness to take a bath, she will be a nice and calm girl.

I
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have to
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add
that I have
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purchased
anything you might need to cook in advance and if you notice, you can
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see
that the refrigerator is full. I have cleaned up the entire
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house
and I have done the laundry too,
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so
there is nothing for you to do,
However
,
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please
vacuum the floor in case you drop any food
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because
ants will take all over the
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house
afterward to collect them.

There is nothing
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left
to say,
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so
if you face any problems,
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please
contact my hotel and
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ask for
room 216. I will try to find a Wi-Fi connection and be in touch with you via WhatsApp.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
darling and thanks again.

Lots of
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love
,

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Saghar

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. • Give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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