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45. You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

45. You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation lj80o
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained some false information. I read the complete article thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same. However, the information related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degree C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not get hotter than 28 degree C in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false information can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover, fake information can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown. I am humbly requesting you to correct the information and republish it in your future prints. In addition to this it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given information was false. I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this important matter. Yours faithfully Rajesh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained
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some
false information.

I read the complete article
thoroughly
. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same.
However
, the
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information
related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degree C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not
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get
hotter than 28 degree C in summers. It is
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important
to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false
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information
can
adversely
affect the tourism industry.
Moreover
, fake
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information
can
negatively
affect the reputation of our hometown.

I am
humbly
requesting you to correct the
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information
and republish it in your future prints.
In addition
to this it would be great if you could
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add
a footnote stating that the
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given
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information
was false.

I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this
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important
matter.

Yours
faithfully


Rajesh

IELTS letter 45. You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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