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You are organising an executive event for the company you work for. Write a letter to the person in charge of the venue that you are considering for the event and ask for detailed information regarding dates, services and cost.

You are organising an executive event for the company you work for. Write a letter to the person in charge of the venue that you are considering for the event and ask for detailed information regarding dates, services and cost. xnm6
Dear Sir or Madam I would like to introduce myself as PB. I am working as a Project Manager at ABC company. I would like to enquire about availability of your main conference room for the final week of April 2021, as we plan to host our company's annual meeting then. In addition to that, it would be great if you could share probable charges and services included if we opt for one of your best packages. As informed, our company's annual meeting has remained the most important day for employees of the company. It usually starts with annual business review for the first two days, followed by a day of annual planning for comming year. The final two days are considered to be staff retreat with fun activities and motiviational workshops. End of the program is marked by lavish buffet dinner with alcholic and non alcholic beverages. I believe the outline is clear to you and expect your event venue to present a service scheme with applicable cost to match the essence for budget approval process. I look forward to hearing from you. I can be reached at +1 00000 0000 during office hours If you wish to discuss details in person. Your Faithfully, PB
Dear Sir or Madam

I would like to introduce myself as PB. I am working as a Project Manager at
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ABC


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company
. I would like to
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enquire
about availability of your main conference
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room


for the final week of April 2021, as we plan to host our
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company
's annual meeting

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then
.
In addition
to that, it would be great if you could share probable charges and services included if we opt for one of your best packages.

As informed, our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's annual meeting has remained the most
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important
day for employees of the
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company
. It
usually
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starts
with annual business review for the
first
two days, followed by a day of annual planning for
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comming
year. The final two days
are considered
to be staff retreat with fun activities and
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motiviational
workshops.
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End
of the program
is marked
by lavish buffet dinner with
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alcholic
and non
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alcholic
beverages. I believe the outline is
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clear
to you and
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expect
your
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event
venue to present a service scheme with applicable cost to match the essence for budget approval process.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can
be reached
at +1 00000 0000 during office hours If you wish to discuss
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details
in person.

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Your
Faithfully
,

PB
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IELTS letter You are organising an executive event for the company you work for. Write a letter to the person in charge of the venue that you are considering for the event and ask for detailed information regarding dates, services and cost.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
205 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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