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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , xmDrg
Dear Mr Kapoor, I am writing with a disheartened heart to inform you that I cannot continue my evening classes due to my busy schedule at work. Due to this pandemic situation, my workload has doubled due to which I am unable to concentrate on my studies. These days, hiring has increased and I have to close all the open positions within a stipulated time. Moreover, as a consequence, I feel tired which is deteriorating my health as well. Owning to so much work pressure, I am not studying as per the commitment. At the moment, I am loaded with recruitment drives which I have to close within the timelines. Also, I have to spend my time on studies and completing the projects assigned but unfortunately, I am unable to do the same. However, I think I cannot pursue the course considering the workload that I have. To the relief, I would like to continue my classes after 2 months so that I can give my best and with full dedication, I can study in order to achieve my set goals. In addition to this, I would like to thank you for supporting me during my tenure and I hope you will understand my situation. Hope to see you in the next session as well. Yours sincerely, Gunjan Mittal.
Dear Mr
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Kapoor
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I am writing with a disheartened heart to inform you that I cannot continue my evening classes due to my busy schedule at work.

Due to this pandemic situation, my workload has doubled due to which I am unable to concentrate on my studies. These days, hiring has increased and I
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have to
close all the open positions within a stipulated time.
Moreover
, as a consequence, I feel tired which is deteriorating my health
as well
. Owning to
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so
much work pressure, I am not studying as per the commitment.

At the moment, I
am loaded
with recruitment drives which I
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have to
close within the timelines.
Also
, I
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have to
spend my time on studies and completing the projects assigned
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but
unfortunately, I am unable to do the same.
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, I
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think
I cannot pursue the course considering the workload that I have.

To the relief, I would like to continue my classes after 2 months
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so
that I can give my best and with full dedication, I can study in order to achieve my set goals.
In addition
to this, I would like to thank you for supporting me during my tenure and I hope you will understand my situation.

Hope to
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see
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next
session
as well
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Yours
sincerely
,

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Gunjan
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Mittal
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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