Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. wj1d
Dear Mrs. Jene, Iam writing to inform you about temporarily discontinuing the part-time evening course that Iam currently persuing with the institute. I currently hold a full-time job at a software company. Though my job demands that I occsaionally extend the hours, I did sign-up for the evening course assuming I could juggle a bit. However, there is a change of situation on the workfront and I need to honour it. My current project is expecting me to travel overseas for a period of three months to be at the customer location. Hence, though I was extremely keen on completing the course in time but it turned out otherwise. However, I would be interested in continuining the course from the point where I left off upon my return. I request you to cascade the message to the institute so I could persue the course when iam back in the country. I look forward to meeting you soon upon my return. Yours Sincerely, Sanya
Dear Mrs.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jene
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Iam
writing to inform you about
temporarily
discontinuing the part-time evening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that
Possible spelling mistake found.
Iam
currently
Possible spelling mistake found.
persuing
with the institute.

I
currently
hold a full-time job at a software
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Though my job demands that I
Possible spelling mistake found.
occsaionally
extend the hours, I did
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
-up for the evening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
assuming I could juggle a bit.
However
, there is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
of situation on the
Possible spelling mistake found.
workfront
and I need to
Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.
honour
it.

My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
project is expecting me to travel overseas for a period of three months to be at the customer location.
Hence
, though I was
extremely
keen on completing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it turned out
otherwise
.

However
, I would
be interested
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
continuining
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from the point where I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
off upon my return. I request you to cascade the message to the institute
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I could
Possible spelling mistake found.
persue
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
when
Possible spelling mistake found.
iam
back in the country.

I look forward to meeting you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
upon my return.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sanya

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.