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Dear Mr and Mrs Wilkins, I am writing this in response to the complaint I received from you regarding the noise you are hearing during the day from my place.

Dear Mr and Mrs Wilkins, I am writing this in response to the complaint I received from you regarding the noise you are hearing during the day from my place. ojjq
Dear Mr and Mrs Wilkins, I am writing this in response to the complaint I received from you regarding the noise you are hearing during the day from my place. All that noise you hear is due to the construction for the expansion of our house. We are adding another room upstairs in our villa for the guests that might visit us in the future. We needed this alot as our previous guest room is transformed to a study room for my teenage son and we did not have any space for the visitors that might come. I am extremely apologetic if you hear any noise caused by the construction workers as they use hammers and drills every now and then. I have requested their supervisor to finish all the noisy work in their wokshop and only assembling should be done at my place which would not cause any disturbance to the people living closeby. I again beg a pardon for any inconvenience. Yours Sincerely, John
Dear Mr and Mrs Wilkins,

I am writing this in response to the complaint I received from you regarding the noise you
The verb 'hearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are hearing
during the day from my place.

All that noise you hear is due to the construction for the expansion of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. We are adding another room upstairs in our villa for the guests that might visit us in the future. We needed this
Possible spelling mistake found.
alot
as our previous guest room
is transformed
to a study room for my teenage
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
son and
we did not have any space for the visitors that might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
.

I am
extremely
apologetic if you hear any noise caused by the construction workers as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
hammers and drills every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and then.

I have requested their supervisor to finish all the noisy work in their
Possible spelling mistake found.
wokshop
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
assembling should
be done
at my place which would not cause any disturbance to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living
Possible spelling mistake found.
closeby
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
again beg a pardon for any inconvenience.

Yours
Sincerely
,

John

IELTS letter Dear Mr and Mrs Wilkins, I am writing this in response to the complaint I received from you regarding the noise you are hearing during the day from my place.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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