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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: g66l
Dear Kelly, I am writing a letter to you about giving thanks to you for helping me to look after my house and pet while my holiday. First of all, I should give my mobile number to you for any urgent cases when I am out of town. You can call me on 23420024 via whatsapp call or you can send my message via whatsapp. If you are not able to contact me via mobile phone and whatsapp, you can try to send to my email address: goku. tang@yahoo. com. hk. Once I have received your missing call or email, I will get back you as soon as possible. On the other hand, please kindly help me with cleaning my kitchen, bathroom, sitting room and 2 bedroad when I was out of town. I have already put some detergents and washing equipment on the table which is in the kitchen. Furthermore, please feed my cat 3 times per day including breakfast, lunch and dinner, and there are some food for my love cat put inside the cupboard located beside TV. Once more thing, please don't forget to wash my dog everyday and keep good hygient. Also, please don't forget to lock the door when you go out of my house. Finally, I hope you will enjoy staying at my home with my cute dog while my trip and once again I am thanksful to you for helps. I am looking forward to hearing from your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Newton
Dear Kelly,

I am writing a letter to you about giving thanks to you for helping me to look after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and pet while my holiday.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I should give my mobile number to you for any urgent cases when I am out of town. You can call me on 23420024 via
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whatsapp
call or you can
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send
my message via
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whatsapp
. If you are not able to contact me via mobile phone and
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whatsapp
, you can try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
to my email address:
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goku
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
tang@yahoo
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
hk
. Once I have received your missing call or email, I will
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get
back you as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

On the other hand
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
please
kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me with cleaning my kitchen, bathroom, sitting room and 2
Possible spelling mistake found.
bedroad
when I was out of town. I have already put
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
detergents and washing equipment on the table which is in the kitchen.
Furthermore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
please
feed my cat 3 times per day including breakfast, lunch and dinner, and there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
food for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
cat put inside the cupboard located beside TV. Once more thing,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
please
don't forget to wash my dog
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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hygient
.

Also
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
please
don't forget to lock the door when you go out of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Finally
, I hope you will enjoy staying at my home with my cute dog while my trip and once again I am
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thanksful
to you for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
. I am looking forward to hearing from your reply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Newton
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
249 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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