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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: explain how you knew about the plans describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood suggest a possible solution to the problem.

You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: explain how you knew about the plans describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood suggest a possible solution to the problem. RBBV
Dear Jack, I recently read about the plans to construct an airport near Elliot Square in the newspapers. It has come to my knowledge that the foundation stone is to be laid next month, and the project is to be completed within the next 2 years. I would like to bring a few concerns to your notice with regards to this project. As you must be aware, our locality is full of retired people, some of them with multiple health concerns. Once this nearby airport becomes fully functional, it would be a nuisance for these old residents who prefer peace and quiet. I do understand the need of an airport with the increasing number of tourists in our city, and I would like to suggest an alternative solution to address our requirement. The biggest real estate company in our city, DLF, owns some land in the north, and to the best of my knowledge it is available for sale and would be well suited for an airport. May I request you to meet with me so that I can walk you through the plan and discuss it in more detail. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards Eesha
Dear Jack,

I recently read about the plans to construct an airport near Elliot Square in the newspapers. It has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my knowledge that the foundation stone is to
be laid
next
month, and the project is to
be completed
within the
next
2 years.

I would like to bring a few concerns to your notice
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
this project. As you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be aware, our locality is full of retired
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them with multiple health concerns. Once this nearby airport becomes
fully
functional, it would be a nuisance for these
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
residents who prefer peace and quiet.

I do understand the need of an airport with the increasing number of tourists in our city, and I would like to suggest an alternative solution to address our requirement. The biggest real estate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in our city, DLF,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owns
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
land in the north, and to the best of my knowledge it is available for sale and would be well suited for an airport.

May I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can walk you through the plan and discuss it in more detail.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards

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Eesha
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IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: explain how you knew about the plans describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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