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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take qdYE
Dear Smita mam, I want to express my sadness towards not able to attend the evening course this days. I am really glad to get the priceless knowledge from you about the course and it’s material. But due to some circumstances I won’t be able to attend the course for next 2 months. As you are aware, me and my younger sister live far away from house and her final exam have started last week, also I am the only one to take her studies. The time I get is in the evening because in the morning I have go for work. I really feel weak to missing the class. Although, I had explain my condition to one of our class member and he is ready to share the course study books with me, so that I do not loose the track completely. I will also try to get in touch with you on weekends to clear my issue on course topic. Hope you don’t mind. Thanks for understanding me. your obedient Student Vishal
Dear
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Smita
mam,

I want to express my sadness towards not able to attend the evening
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course
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this days
. I am
really
glad to
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get
the priceless knowledge from you about the
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course
and it’s material.
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But
due to
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some
circumstances I won’t be able to attend the
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course
for
next
2 months.

As you are aware, me and my younger sister
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live
far away from
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house
and her final exam have
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started
last week,
also
I am the
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only
one to take her studies. The time I
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get
is in the evening
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because
in the morning I have
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go
for work. I
really
feel weak to missing the
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class
.

Although, I had
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explain
my condition to one of our
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class
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member and
he is ready to share the
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course
study books with me,
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so
that I do not loose the
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track
completely. I will
also
try to
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get
in touch with you on weekends to
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clear
my issue on
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course
topic. Hope you don’t mind.

Thanks for understanding me.

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your
obedient Student

Vishal

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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