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A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening 8YlP
Dear John, I am very glad you are coming to visit me. Unfortunately, I will be busy until the evening on the day you arrive, but dont worry, I left the keys to my house under the door math so you can get in and make yourself at home until I get there. Now, once you get out of the train go directly to the bus station and wait for the number 45 route bus that will take you to my house. It is a twenty minute bus trip that makes a nice tour through town. When the bus reaches the old church at Winchester Avenue get off the bus and walk one block down to get to my house. The full adress is 357 Winchester Avenue. I will be arriving around 7: 00 p. m. which is a perfect time for us to have some italian dinner on a nice restaurant downtown. Yours sincerely, David
Dear John,

I am
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glad you are coming to visit me. Unfortunately, I will be busy until the evening on the day you arrive,
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under the door math
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in and
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yourself at home until I
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there.

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, once you
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out of the train go
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to the bus station and wait for the number 45 route bus that will take you to my
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. It is a
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bus trip that
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a nice tour through town. When the bus reaches the
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church at Winchester Avenue
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off the bus and walk one block down to
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to my
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. The full
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is 357 Winchester Avenue.

I will be arriving around 7: 00 p. m. which is a perfect time for us to have
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dinner on a nice restaurant downtown.

Yours
sincerely
,

David

IELTS letter A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

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155 words
5.0
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