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Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the complaint reported for the reception area and possible options for enhancing the reception area.

Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the complaint reported for the reception area and possible options for enhancing the reception area. DnDa
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the complaint reported for the reception area and possible options for enhancing the reception area. In recent time, we have received several complaints about reception space. Most of our customers reported about long queue due to single counter with a receptionist. Moreover, the space is limited as a result it becomes impossible to maintain the line when it crowded. A reception zone bears the image of a company as it creates the first impression to the customers. If the customers look this congested welcoming area, they may get negative about organization eventually that hampers company's reputation. After analyzing, I have some recommendations to flourish the space. We should widen the place by adding the store room with it by breaking the dividing wall. One new service counter can be introduced along with hiring a new receptionist. New furniture can be brought to beautify and provide option for resting as we will have spacious area. I look forward to your feedback soon. Yours faithfully, Iqbal
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the complaint reported for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
area and possible options for enhancing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
area.

In recent time, we have received several complaints about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
space. Most of our customers reported about long queue due to single counter with a receptionist.
Moreover
, the space
is limited
as a result
it becomes impossible to maintain the line when it crowded.

A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
zone bears the image of a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as it creates the
first
impression to the customers. If the customers look this congested welcoming area, they may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
about organization
eventually
that hampers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's reputation.

After analyzing, I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
recommendations to flourish the space. We should widen the place by adding the store room with it by breaking the dividing wall. One new service counter can
be introduced
along with hiring a new receptionist. New furniture can
be brought
to beautify and provide option for resting as we will have spacious area.

I look forward to your feedback
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
, Iqbal
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IELTS letter Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the complaint reported for the reception area and possible options for enhancing the reception area.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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