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You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the manager of the company - Give full details of your order. - Explain why you need the book urgently. - Suggest a solution for the situation.

You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the manager of the company - Give full details of your order. - Explain why you need the book urgently. - Suggest a solution for the situation. PeoX
Dear Sir, I feel the need to bring an issue, I encountered with your company regarding the delay of arriving my ordered book. I had placed my requirement of “The Majestic Fort” written by Thomas on your website dated March 1, 2021, reference number-021 in urgency by paying extra charges for the quickest delivery within 24 hours. After connecting with customer care, they elaborated the situation by providing excuse of shortage of staff. I have to submit my college assignment by the end of mid-march precursor to this book as reference and my situation is vulnerable. If, I could not submit the task within stipulated time schedule, I would be debarred from examination. Kindly, adopt some measures to support my condition. You can track the online order with the assistance of the unique code prescribed above. During emergency situations, employ additional manpower owing to the fact that it can demolish the brand equity of your organization.
Dear Sir,

I feel the need to bring an issue, I encountered with your
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company
regarding the delay of arriving my ordered book. I had placed my requirement of “The Majestic Fort” written by Thomas on your website dated March 1, 2021, reference number-021 in urgency by paying extra charges for the quickest delivery within 24 hours. After connecting with customer care, they elaborated the situation by providing excuse of shortage of staff.

I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
submit my college assignment by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of mid-march precursor to this book as reference and my situation is vulnerable. If, I could not submit the task within stipulated time schedule, I would
be debarred
from examination.

Kindly, adopt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
measures to support my condition. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
the online order with the assistance of the unique code prescribed above. During emergency situations, employ additional manpower owing to the fact that it can demolish the brand equity of your organization.

IELTS letter You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the manager of the company - Give full details of your order. - Explain why you need the book urgently. - Suggest a solution for the situation.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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