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You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the manager of the company - Give full details of your order. - Explain why you need the book urgently. - Suggest a solution for the situation.

You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the manager of the company - Give full details of your order. - Explain why you need the book urgently. - Suggest a solution for the situation. NExd
I'm writing this letter to express my disappointment with a recent purchase on your online bookstore, order number #12345. I ordered a computer book which is written by J. MacMillan and published by XOM. I ordered this book 2 weeks ago on 21th of September and payed the fees by credit card, the payment serial is 456 but I haven't received my book yet. I'm a university student and I need the book for my final exam which is in the next 3 weeks. Unfortunately I lost these 2 weeks since I've ordered the book and as a result I couldn't follow my schedule. Please let me know what the reason for this delay is. Besides, I need to know what is the exact arrival time for my order. If you don't inform me until tomorrow I want my money back. You can contact me via email, my email address is: a@gmail. com.
I'm writing this letter to express my disappointment with a recent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
on your online bookstore, order number #12345. I ordered a computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
which
is written
by J. MacMillan and published by
Possible spelling mistake found.
XOM
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
ordered this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
2 weeks ago on
Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.
21th
of September and
Only in a nautical context 'payed' is an acceptable past tense form of 'pay'. Please check!
payed
the fees by credit card, the payment serial is 456
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I haven't received my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
yet
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm a university student and I need the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
for my final exam which is in the
next
3 weeks. Unfortunately I lost these 2 weeks since I've ordered the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
and
as a result
I couldn't follow my schedule.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know what the reason for this delay is.
Besides
, I need to know what is the exact arrival time for my order. If you don't inform me until tomorrow I want my money back. You can contact me via email, my email address is:
Possible spelling mistake found.
a@gmail
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
.

IELTS letter You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the manager of the company - Give full details of your order. - Explain why you need the book urgently. - Suggest a solution for the situation.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
153 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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