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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. bnbB
Dear Mr. Alim, This is intaf Ali, a student in beginner’s trading which I have joined three week back, and I am presently working as a full time store manager job in redtag, as next week sale promotion are about to start, which will end up after three months. Due to which there will be mental and physical pressure to end up work in deadline, so most of the time I have to do overtime to finish the work in time. Coming three months will be completely exhausted after work, due to this hectic schedule It might affect my personal health too. And I don’t want to get it more worst. So I was planning to postpone the classes for three month. I am writing this letter to inform you that I want to discontinue the classes, once this sale season is over, I will be contacting you for further process Your sincerely, Intaf
Dear Mr.
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Alim
,

This is
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intaf
Ali, a student in beginner’s trading which I have
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joined
three
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week
back, and I am
presently
working as a full time store manager job in
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redtag
, as
next
week sale promotion are about to
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start
, which will
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end
up after three months. Due to which there will be mental and physical pressure to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
up work in deadline,
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so
most of the time I
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have to
do overtime to finish the work in time.

Coming three months will be completely exhausted after work, due to this hectic schedule It might affect my personal health too. And I don’t want to
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get
it
Use only "worst" (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
more worst
.
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So
I was planning to postpone the classes for three
Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".
month
.

I am writing this letter to inform you that I want to discontinue the classes, once this sale season is over, I will be contacting you for
further
process

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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Intaf

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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153 words
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.