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You eat at your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria, say what is wrong with it, suggest how it could be improved. You should write at least 150 words.

You eat at your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria, say what is wrong with it, suggest how it could be improved. ydPJ

Dear Mr. Maharjan, I am writing this letter in order to express my personal concern about the current situation of our cafeteria. What I like the most, is the delicious food available there. Though the food are amazing, there are lot of amendments to be made. The primary concern should be given to the cleanliness and hygienic environment of the cafeteria. Furthermore, most of the student complain about the drinking water as well. On the top of that, the price of the food is high than the food corners. This make students to find an alternatives outside the college. With these sorts of problems, students are oblique to eat outside the college. I want to request to publish this issue in the next release of our college magazine. This may help the cafeteria to be more attentive and acknowledge the problem faced by the students more effectively. If you have any questions, please let me know. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Sabita Thapa

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