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I hope you are doing well. I am writing a letter to tell you that my husband George and I will visit you this summer.

I hope you are doing well. I am writing a letter to tell you that my husband George and I will visit you this summer. X5VE

Dear Auntie May, I hope you are doing well. I am writing a letter to tell you that my husband George and I will visit you this summer. We are planning to stay Toronto from 20th - 25th July. We will arrive Union Station at 11: 30am on 20th July and get the train back to Barrie at 5: 30pm on 25th July. We would like to go to Canada's Wonderland on 23th July, as you mentioned that it is one of the largest amusement park in Toronto. So, we booked the tickets immediately after buying the train tickets. However, we haven't booked accommodations yet. We hope to have more time to gather with your family because we haven't met for two years. Can we stay at your apartment in this trip? We will pay for the ourselves on food and transportation. Apart from this, we will do housework for you. It would be grateful if we can stay at your house. I am looking forward to your reply. Best Regards, Lucy

Dear Auntie May,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing a letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that my husband George and I will visit you this summer.

We are planning to stay Toronto from 20th Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 25th July. We will Did you mean "arrive in" or "arrive at"?arrive inarrive at
arrive
 Union Station at 11: 30am on 20th July and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the train back to Barrie at 5: 30pm on 25th July. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
 would like to go to Canada's Wonderland on Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.21st22nd23rd
23th
 July, as you mentioned that it is one of the largest amusement park in Toronto. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, we booked the tickets immediately after buying the train tickets.

However
, we haven't booked accommodations yet
. We hope to have more time to gather with your family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we haven't met for two years. Can we stay at your apartment in this trip? We will pay for Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "ourselves"?theourselves
the ourselves
 on food and transportation. Apart from this, we will do housework for you. It would be grateful if we can stay at your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards,

Lucy